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One of my instructors shared a story about getting a manuscript from an elderly neighbor who told him it was a memoir of their life. It was thousands of pages long and in the form of journal entries that covered decades, but even though there were so many volumes there was no actual story. She had led a very easy life with almost no conflict. How do you tell someone that their life story doesn’t really have a story? It was tough I’m certain, but the bottom line is without struggle or strife there is nothing to hang the story’s hat on.
Every scene should have a purpose to move the story along and little conflicts drive scenes. Not every scene has to have something epic, but there needs to be some point of contention. I read recently that you should never have two people in a scene that agree with each other. The person that agrees is simply redundant. It’s fine to have them in the background, but the core conflict for that scene should be between opposing stances.
Pay attention to the little opportunities that pop up to add some tension.
Now go write.